Comments on: I have seen you many times

By: Nrst

Nrst — Thu, 17 Dec 2009 12:07:58 +0000

This certainly is beautiful.
The idea that only a catastrophe could disturb the equilibrium of non-more-than-eye-contact the protagonist and the other character share seems very life-like; I don’t know why, but for me, it captures nicely how I often feel in day-to-day life.
“our stories are told with light”, just like the movie the protagonist almost sees the other character in and the leaf that flickers in the wind, the pictures the protagonist would take.

I’m not quite sure about the city as a statistical ensemble; is that the reason the protagonist and the other character always meet again despite the protagonist’s randomness, or is the pulse of the city that which almost makes meeting the other character another story told with light?

By: shah

shah — Thu, 26 Nov 2009 09:30:16 +0000

everything i have tried to shut down comes back>>

By: ava

ava — Tue, 17 Nov 2009 02:12:15 +0000

I loved this post… <3

By: Lauren

Lauren — Wed, 14 Oct 2009 05:09:10 +0000

This makes me want to moan with the sound of the subway, and cry, and lean over the counter to breathe on the neck of my coffee slinger crush(es) and tell them too much too close.

And I’m glad to have read it. It calls to moments in my memory and pulls at my heart.

By: ritz

ritz — Tue, 08 Sep 2009 04:15:29 +0000

if you are who i think you are, can you just let me know?

and i promise not to close my eyes when i see you.

By: Aurore

Aurore — Thu, 03 Sep 2009 23:15:26 +0000

Perhaps I love this because it’s my near home town, and you finally updated. But I feel that this is the best you have done as of yet; the wait was worthwhile. Thanks for this particular Lovesick.